This is my second elevator pitch for my mobile car service idea in Gainesville.
I received some really good feedback from my first Elevator Pitch that I will be able to use for my mobile car service idea. I have decided I need an app to make it easier for the consumers to reach me, I will offer a car wash and vacuum with every job, and I am only going to stick to small jobs, so my work can be quick and efficient. Really looking forward to applying these fixes and improving my idea.
Ralph,
ReplyDeleteYour youtube video is private, change it so that it's "unlisted" so we can all see it. You also haven't written any notable content for this when you were supposed to, so you need to fix this pronto.
here's my blog: http://ent3003sinon.blogspot.ie/2016/02/sinontech-elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey man sorry about that, but I appreciate the help. Just made the changes.
DeleteHey Ralph,
ReplyDeleteI don't mean to sound rude, but it seems that you are missing the idea of the elevator pitch. The feedback that you talked about was supposed to be typed in your blogpost text. The elevator pitch itself is your opportunity to sell your business idea within 60 seconds (give or take). Your idea seems fantastic, especially since I come from a family of auto mechanics. Just shape up your elevator pitch so people can buy into your idea and you should be set! Here is my post: http://juansesoto.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-swap-in-swamp.html
Hello Ralph! I appreciate the effort your put in this 2nd elevator pitch, but it would be better if you can actually perform your improved pitch in this video rather than talking about it. I am sure if you include that more people will buy into your business idea! If you like, please check out my blog: http://wtl328.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteHey Ralph,
ReplyDeleteRegarding your pitch I did the same thing commenting on comments since I thought that was what we were supposed to do but the other videos I watched just redid the pitch itself so hopefully we did it right! But sadly according to the other comments I dont think we did it right... Best of luck to the future and points! If you want to check out my blog here's the link - http://derekdonahueentrepreneurship.blogspot.com/search?updated-min=2016-01-01T00:00:00-05:00&updated-max=2017-01-01T00:00:00-05:00&max-results=16